Surprise~

Hey guys, i am back. I just wanna say sorry as i had some bad days .. a guy cheated on md, and also, there were some other study related issues, too....but now i am back and i will keep posting alternately

Let's begin

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Author's pov

As radhika decided to surprise her hetvi she was checking her bag and was ready to go to vadodra,Gujarat

Mrs.patil: radhu zala ka sagla avrun ja lavkar nahitar late hoil

(Radhu have you packed everything ..go soon or you will be late)

Radhika: ho aai zalach chal bye aai ,bye pappa

[Yes mom i did everything comeon bye mom bye dad]

Mr.patil: radhu tithe jashil tar adhi mandiraat ja ani maag hetvi kadhe ja

(Radhu when you will reach their go to the temple first and then go and surprise hetvi)

Mrs.patil: karji ghe g(take care)

Radhu: yes boss ..now byee

[Radhika went and booked a taxi (she is middle class girl) and went to the airport ..soon she sat and flight landed vadodra at 10:00 am]

Guys the time require to go from mumbai to vadodra is just 1 hr

Radhika:finally i came here ...

(She booked a cab and went to shri dwarkadhish temple which was just 15-20 mins away from airport )

Radhika: krishna he bagh tu maza partner ahes na tu ani Ganpati Bappa dogha hi maza sagra kahi ahat ...mazi nehmi chi iccha mhanjhe mazya gharchyana ani hetvi chya gharchyana sukhi thev ..(krishna see you are my partner you and lord ganesh are my everything...i will pray my regular prayer of keeping my parents and hetvi's family happy)

Radhika was praying and few boys were checking her out at the temple

Boy 1: kya sexy chokri hai!!

The group laughed and radhika heard it

Radhika: yehi sexy chokri tumhara future barbaad kar sakti hai ..

Boy2: arey future kyu hame barbaad kar do

Radhika: gareebo ko barbaad karne ke sanskar nahi hai hamare

She left from their but the group of boys were following her and suddenly she saw hetvi's father(Mr.thakkar) was standing infront of her

Boy 1: arey chalo ye strict DCP thakkar hai...galat ladki se panga le liya

Saying this the group of boys ran and radhika went and hugged mr.thakkar

Radhika:kaka aap yaha?

Mr.thakkar : tere papa ka call aya tha aur unhone kaha ki tum ayi ho mandir mai ho

Radhika: arey toh mera surprise gaya 😔

She said feeling sad

Mr.thakkar : nahi beta hetvi ko aur tumhari kaki ko kuch nahi bataya ...abhi surprise vaisa hi hai chalo chale

Radhika: ji 😃

Radhika went wore her footwears and when she turned she got slip but a boy holded her and her dupatta came on her face ...he wasn't able to look at her face but saw a bracelet on her hand ..

His friend came to him so she said thank you fastly and went towards the car..

Meanwhile at Aarush side

Mrs.patel: aarush dikra (beta) suun tu aaj shri dwarkadish mandir ja aur pandit ji ko yeh thali de de

Aarush: ha mummy

Aarush called gautam OTP

Gautam: ha bol gadedha

Aarush: alien suun hame na aaj dwarkadish mandir jana hai thal leke mai bike chalata hu tu thal pakad piche

Gautam : ha 2 min rukh tere ghar ke paas hi hu

Call ended

Aarush and gautam went in the dwarkadish temple and gave the thal(plate) to pandit ji and prayed

Aarush:(in mind) hey dwarkadish mere mummy papa ko hamesha khush rakhna aur ha mere sapno vali jo ladki hai jo sirf aapko pata hai aur gautam ko usse jald se jald milana ...101 nariyal (coconut)chadaunga plzz

Gautam: (in mind) hey dwarkadhish aap mere iss gadhedo ko aur kaka kaki ko khush rakhna mere jese anath ko bhi inhone itne pyaar se bada kiya hai aur ha vo..umm hetvi ko pasand karta hu toh fir iss navratri please usse haa bulva dena ...101 nariyal(coconut) chadaunga

They did their prayer and gautam said

"Ho gaya maska lagake?"

Aarush: jaise ki tune maska lagaya hi nahi bhabhi ke liy

Gautam: chup ree

Aarush : dekh abhi tu sharam se laal ho gaya hai 😂

Gautam : tere paas 3 second hai bhaag varna 🔪🔪🔪

Aarush ran and while he was running he saw a girl was about to fall he went and holded her by her waist her dupatta fell on her face so aarush couldn't see her...

Gautam came running and that girl left while saying thank you hurriedly

Gautam: kon thi?

Aarush : pata nahi kaun thi baas uska bracelet dekha maine ..areyyy ye dekh uska bracelet toh mere paas reh gaya rukh dekar ata hu

Aarush went to search the bracelet wali girl but he couldn't find her so he kept the bracelet thinking he would find her later

They both went to their home

At thakkar mansion

Mr.thakkar : hetviii kidhar hai tu

Hetvi: ha papa- radhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu tu yaha kab ayi? Kaise ayi? Muze kyu nahi bataya ?

Radhika: arey meri darling teri rajdhani(train ) dhire kar ...mai tuze surprise dene ayi toh batati kaise ..

Radhka told hetvi about her surprise and how uncle met her and etc etc.

Mrs.thakkar: arey gadhedi radhu ko pani toh de de ..bichari ayi hai tabse usse sawaal puch rahi hai

(Like this they spended a sweet time together and it was evening time soon)

Hetvi: radhu chal shopping chale

Radhika: ha chal .. mandvi market chalte hai fir aaj

At patel mansion

Mrs.patel: arey Aarush kitna kaam karega jabse mandir se aya hai tabhi se kaam kar raha hai

Aarush: ha maa thodi der aur

Mr.patel: apko yaad hai mai jabhi ceo tha tabhi aisa hi tha

Mrs.patel: ha sachme jaisa baap vaisa beta

Mr.patel laughed

At mandvi market

[Mandvi market is a local market for clothes, food and etc stuff in vadodra]

Hetvi: radhu aaj pura market kharid lenge chal

Radhika: arey meri rajdhani ..dhire kaun bolega ki tu doctor hai ...

Hetvi: doctor hum hospital ke hai yaha hum sirf radhu-hetvi hai

Radhika : achha hospital se yaad aya vo pagal banda jo haar roj atta hai tuze dekhne vo kaun hai

Hetvi: ooi pagal mat bol mere pyaar ko kitna handsome hai voh ...vo maine tuze kaha na patel food industries unke eklaute(one and only) bete ka bestfriend hai

Radhika: achha ok

Hetvi: abhi voh chod chal vo dekh tere favorite jhumke aur uske baju mai payal haii

Hetvi: kaka e payal ketla na apeya?( uncle what is the price of this payal)

Payal seller: 100rs ji

Hetvi: 100 nahi kaka 50 man api do(not for 100rs kaka give them for 50)

[Bargaining is a secret talent of all indians ]

Radhika: hetvi tere payal ho gaye kya leke ye dekh maine ye jhumke le liye

Hetvi: saras che ( they are nice)

Hetvi: yeh dekh maine ye payal le liya

This is what she took for her radhu

Radhika: acha hai ..abhi kapde bhi le le

??: arey kapde kyu lene hai aaj raat milo sare kapde utar dunga 😏

(A voice came from back )

Hetvi: o hello parth beradia thoda tameez se baat kar varna tuze pata hai 2 min bhi nahi lungi tuze jail mai ghasitkar le jane ke liye

Parth: arey tuze kaun bol raha hai mai toh iss hot si ladki ko puch raha hu ..gujrat ki toh nahi lagti, hai kaun tu

Radhika: jo bhi hu tumare aukaat se bahar hu

Parth: ye to mere bed par dekh lenge ...aaj raat aajao regret nahi karogi 😉

Radhika slapped him and parth was about to slap him when gautam came

Gautam: ladkiyon par haat uthana na maardo ka kaam hai

Parth: aee gautam tu dur hi reh mere matter se ..aarush ke paiso par jita hai anath kutta

Gautam: ha hu mai anath toh acha hai mere maa baap nahi hai tere jaise ..tera baap jo gujrat ki haar ladki ko buri nazar se dekhta hai aur teri maa jo tuze kachre ki tarah treat karti hai

Parth: tu jyaada bol raha hai

Hetvi: parth tu chup reh aur nikal yaha se varna eek DCP ki beti hu aur ek doctor bhi pata hai kannon se self defense mai tuze maar bhi sakti hu aur doctor hu isiliye aisa marungi ki uthega nahi

(Parth went from their glaring at three of them )

Hetvi: gautam thank you bachane ke liye aur ha uski baaton ka bura maat mana tumhe pata hai na vo kaisa hai

Gautam: ha hetvi tum dono thik ho na

Gautam and hetvi were looking into each others eyes continuously so radhika faked coughed

Radhika: ahmm hetvi chal jate hai aaj ke liye baas jewellery kafi hai

Hetvi: ha , bye gautam

Gautam stood there waving back at her till she left from his eye sight even hetvi was continuously looking back at him

Radhika: tuze voh pasand hai na aur yehi vo psyco hai jo haar roj ata hai tere hospital mai ?

Hetvi : (while blushing) ha

Radhika: yess aaj party banti hai meri dost pyaar mai hai!! yuhuuuu

It was night time till they went home and ofc they were tired after this drama so they ate the dinner and went to hetvi's room

( note : hetvi and radhika are living in same room)

Radhika's pov

Today at temple who was that boy who hold me , my bracelet wait - o noo!!! I left my bracelet there it is with that boy now uff how will i even find this boy now ..argh

Hetvi's pov

Today at market, gautam protected me and radhu from that parth ..how nice he is i will say yes to him on garba night or should i propose him ...i will propose him the same night only yess

Aarush's pov

The bracelet girl ..i don't know why i am thunking of her from thia morning ..i didn't saw her but then too i can surely tell she is so beautiful ..so i will call her bracelet as that was the first thing i saw when i was there...

Gautam's pov

I

think i should tell the market matter to aarush so that we can take that mf to the torture room ...argh but how beautiful hetvi was looking today i go and see her everyday coz i love her so much i get myself hurt just to see her ..she is driving me crazyy

It was night time hetvi and radhika were sleeping peacefully when someone came from the window making the vase infront of the video brake and hetvi shouted

Hetvi: bhoot !! Radhuu bhoot aya!!!!!!

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Hey guys ,,

Hope you liked the chapter..

I wrote it twice as whattpad deleted my story so please do vote aur reach ki reaching karwa do

Who is that someone who entered in hetvi's room?

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